The General

sat by the bodies of his men

his foot soldiers

all piled up in a heap

scraps of flesh waved adieu in the breeze on corpses

as if cast by random fate in a tangle of defeat by some deranged Deity

only his mastiff lingered in loco parentis

loved ones sensed the carnage but were not privy to the sight

they grieved in private half a planet away

better they had seen it all in plain sight

and not to have to process their goodbyes without anointing the memory before them

with some faint trembling hope

the General sat

he gave no speech and pulled away his epaulettes and medals

his person naked now just a man

and returned them to the campfire of memories

in escrow for some braver valiant

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  1. A rare sense of culpability – the poor young Russian soldiers slaughtered through stupid leadership? Could it even be Gettysburgh? Imagery Sad MH

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    1. I’m thinking that hard military men surrounding photos of Putin on Victory Day, many of their colleagues dead now at his hand in Ukraine, must have had a better side or even better angels somewhere as Abraham Lincoln said in his first inaugural address on the cusp of the Civil War.

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